I lie in my bed
Thoughts running in my head
What the hell I am living for?
Answer to it is what I am craving for
Suicidal is what I become
When I get no answer in return
I know I ain't going to die
Before giving my life a last try
2.30 and mom drops in
Awake at this hour crapping?
Not to create a scene, I go to bed
Only to be mentally dead
I love nights, let me enjoy it
Discipline is something, follow it
What is discipline, who sets it?
Society does, you have to respect it
To hell with society
Which gives me anxiety
Let me be free, reach for the sky
Like the bird, flying high
Studies is not my priority
Nor is the 8 to 8 job
For I know
My life is short
This is what I write
When mind is full of sprite
Later when I read it
I call myself a fucked up shit!
Thoughts running in my head
What the hell I am living for?
Answer to it is what I am craving for
Suicidal is what I become
When I get no answer in return
I know I ain't going to die
Before giving my life a last try
2.30 and mom drops in
Awake at this hour crapping?
Not to create a scene, I go to bed
Only to be mentally dead
I love nights, let me enjoy it
Discipline is something, follow it
What is discipline, who sets it?
Society does, you have to respect it
To hell with society
Which gives me anxiety
Let me be free, reach for the sky
Like the bird, flying high
Studies is not my priority
Nor is the 8 to 8 job
For I know
My life is short
This is what I write
When mind is full of sprite
Later when I read it
I call myself a fucked up shit!
This is my 1st attempt at poetry!
I thank Varun and KJ for helping me write the above piece of crap!
6 comments:
first, its not crap,
i liked it... and i liked the way u described ur emotions....
it shows the true feelings... and as a first attempt its better than anything......
KEEP IT UP!!!!
very good suki[:)]
Nice! You could express yourself well! With time,you would improve like anything! As a first attempt, it showed how fucked up you are! So,thats good!
Btw,whatever you want to do,I shall always support you!
N dying young..I wont let that happen...and you know the reason!
muaaaaaaaaaah :P
cool man....
u are a multi-talented crap[:P]..j/k ....chap*....
there is really some honesty in watever u write....but remember...dont write things coz u have to...write things which are heart-felt....
lage raho...
all the best[:)]
good attempt as it was the first time that you are writing.. izzat se saare emotions ko apne poem mein vomit kar diya!! :))
keep writing!
Good attempt!!!
still room for improvement
(there is always:P)
you completed earlier than you expected?
awosome
y all your first attempt are such a success :O
khade khade
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